Friday, January 7, 2011

childrens story 1 draft1

hatching eggs
Justin is just a normal boy until friday nights when his babysitter comes over and introduces him to a new world. Elllie is just a normal teenage girl unless she's babysitting then she gets to be a kid again. Two ordinary kids teach us all that anybody can take an ordinary night and make it magical
Justin Scott sat on the couch pouting, he didn't want his parents to leave. He had to stay home and have a babysitter his parents just laughed when they looked over at him./ A knock sounded on the door and Ellie was let in she was the new neighbor and when Mr and Mrs Scott had learned that she was a babysitter they decided to go out. Justin blamed her for his parents leaving. Justin didn't move once while Ellie talked to his parents./ After they left Ellie smiled at Justin but when he just sank deeper into the couch she knew that she would have to try something else./ walking over to the sliding door Ellie gasped, "Why didn't you tell me Justin?" Justin couldn't help himself he answered her "didn't tell you what?" "You have dragon eggs in the backyard!" Justin ran to the back door but didn't see anything/ Ellie opened the door and went outside, Justin followed her, she stopped at a collection of big rocks "These are huge. They're gonna hatch any day" /Justin frowned "what are you talking about, these are rocks" Ellie looked down at him "you don't see it? the smootheness of it the way that the you can almost feel it breathing." as Ellie kept describing what a dragon egg was like Justin started to see it too he could even feel it breathing then all of a sudden the egg started shaking/ "Whats happening Ellie." "I think the eggs are starting to hatch" Justin looked around "But where are their parents? What if they forgot them? Ellie whats gonna happen to them if their parents don't come home?" /Ellie got down in front of him "Don't worry Justin Dragons leave to go and get their babies food and things like that but they always come back, they love their babies and would never leave them forever. If the eggs hatch before the parents get back we could watch them." "Do you know how to watch baby dragons?" Ellie laughed "its a lot like babysitting. We can do it" /The eggs started shaking even more "Ellie I think they're hatching!" after he said it one of the eggs made a big cracking sound a little flat head popped out followed by a tall neck the other eggs hatched too but while the first had been blue one of these was green and one was red/ they all climbed out of the eggs showing round little tummys and extra long tales. Justin laughed at them, the dragons got up and started playing./ "look at them, they know that their parents will be back." justin did see/ he got up dragged Ellie with him and started playing with the dragons- they played dragon hide and seek,- dragon go fish---- in the middle of a game of dragon tag the three dragons cried out they had gotten their tales tangled up/ Ellie and Justin helped to untangle them and when they started to play again Ellie stopped Justin ran up and tagged her "your it Ellie. Whats wrong?" "what? Oh nothings wrong but look Justin" she pointed to the sky "I don't see anything"/ "you don't? You don't see anything flying towards the house." then Justin saw it two big things flying towards the house as they got closer he could see that they were two huge dragons. "their parents! they came back!"/ as the dragons landed and reunited with their children Ellie and Justin watched after they left Justin looked at his house and saw lights coming into the driveway. "Mom. Dad"/ Justin ran in the house and hugged his parents when they walked in./ Ellie got ready to leave and before she went she smiled at the big rocks in the backyard. /After she was gone Justin asked his parents "is she coming over again next week?" His mom laughed "we'll ask" Justin couldn't wait for their next adventure. It would be as fun as this one.

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