Friday, August 7, 2009

story #4

Vanessa is 18 she is amazing and she doesn't realize it she is to busy hiding behind her brain and friends to accept that she has so much more to give but when her security blankets aka her grandpa and best friends "die" she is plunged into a world of intrigue and lies and she will have to trust the person keeping the most from her but when she finds out that everything she thought she knew was a lie can she learn to depend on herself and live up to her name

13 comments:

  1. amanda I was completely thinking of you when I wrote the character of her best friend who "dies" last

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  2. DIE? I audibly gasped when I read that. It sounds really good, though. How and why do they die? Wait, quotation marks?

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  3. ok spoiler alert (hee hee) they don't die they make everyone thinks you are and guess what your character has a love interest named David

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  5. Interesting name choice. What is the best friends name?

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  6. well I'm thinking of Amanda that is the name I was thinking when I had the idea

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  7. Well, hurry up and write it so I can read it :D

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  8. you know that I have never been able to fully write one

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  9. Well, tomorrow's another day, and I'm waiting anyway, so bring on the words

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  10. A song was stuck in my head and it turned into an order for you to write those books! :P
    It was this song: Jo Dee Messina - Bring On the Rain, with my own words inserted :)
    ~Amanda on Jacob's account by accident

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  11. well I noticed that it was just random and stuff

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  12. Ok so I just noticed one of the comments is by Amber I am so blind I didn't see that

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